Give the reader hell. Stretch the reader.

“Gluttony and sloth, as worldly goals, were quietly usurped by avarice and lust,…”

“Imagine the terrestrial timespan as an outstretched arm: a single swipe of an e…”

“He frowned. She laughed. He brightened. She pouted. He grinned. She flinched. C…”

“When a man conclusively exalts one woman, and one woman only, “above all others…”